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As We Once Were[WARNING WITH THE FORCE OF A THOUSAND SUNS]
This is an MLP:FiM shipping fanfiction featuring Princess Celestia and Princess Luna. Yes, sisters. Yes, together. That's why I'm posting a warning. Don't give me that look. What do you mean "that wasn't a look", it totally was! Whatever, you have been warned.
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As We Once Were
by CosmicWaltz

Celestia smiled, reading through the letter from Twilight as she lay in her bed. Her student had again learned a lesson in the magic of friendship, reporting it to her mentor at day's end as always. Celestia giggled to herself, lightly amused at how serious the unicorn took her ass

In Search of the Sun Ch2In Search of the Sun
By CosmicWaltz

Chapter 2

The Night Guards again took to the air, Luna's cart trailing, on their flight back to Canterlot. The adventurous group was left at the edge of the always foreboding Everfree Forest. The songs of millions of strange insects and animals echoed from within the dark depths, creating a static wall of noise. Everypony could feel it staring back at them, almost as though the forest itself was alive.

"This is so cool!" Spike excitedly chimed from his place on Twilight's back.

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Trouble with Rhymes - Coloredby *CosmicWaltz

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LET'S GET PHONETIC UP IN THIS BITCH!
Orange - ôrənj or ärənj
Hinge - hinj

Outside of dialect, they do not rhyme. We can battle semantics, but at the end of the day, they're only "near-rhymes".
Not that there aren't a few things that do rhyme with orange (even if I haven't found any that are accepted as true "words"; the ones I've seen being proper nouns or portmanteaus), but "door hinge" and "hinge" do not. [/EDIT]

[EDIT2] Oops. I forgot shadows. Hey, it's a simple mistake! This pic took all of 3 hours from blank canvas to full color, and the entire coloring process was done in my underwear in the dark while listening to British soft rock. These things happen. XD [/EDIT2]

[EDIT3] So many edits. Okay, I re-added the warning. Eh, why not? It's just a click from seeing it anyway. [/EDIT3]

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~KillerOreoXD Mar 21, 2013 New member

damn orange Y NOTHING RHYME WITH YOU?!

*CosmicWaltz Mar 22, 2013 Hobbyist General Artist

Or silver. Or purple.

I think colors just hate English.

*SoulDragonWithFlow Dec 8, 2012 Hobbyist Writer

Ah applejack,something trubbles you no?
and you wish for a solution before you go..

ya zacora, i dont know what to do, i think...
i think im in love with Rainbow.

applejack a problem this is not,
for RD too loves you a lot.
if you wish to be happy my farmyard friend,
your feelings for the one you love you must not pretend

what in the hay ate u on about!

if you wish to be happy,
to tell her is the key,
if you do this,
then in bed with RD you will soon be.

*CosmicWaltz Dec 8, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

You got an awful lot out of Zecora dropping a rhyme and swearing. O.o

*SoulDragonWithFlow Dec 8, 2012 Hobbyist Writer

haha

indeed i did
thats what insperation is about no?

*CosmicWaltz Dec 8, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

Something like that. XP

~sevenofeleven Dec 8, 2012

Applejack with the coat of reddish yellow, I have avoided
rhyming with orange and am feeling pretty mellow!

Looks great.

*CosmicWaltz Dec 8, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

"Twilight, with mane so purple! ... DAMMIT!"

~sevenofeleven Dec 8, 2012

Twilight with the mane of reddish blue,
can avoid rhyming with purple and cheat too!

Na'gonda the Zebra Psychiatrist:
Zecora's incessant rhyming is a sign of
trauma brought on by the horrible death of her Mama.
She blames herself for the terrible deed, more psychiatric
care she does need.

I will need more time in the analyst's couch, so I can get help
from rhyming too mouch, um much.

*CosmicWaltz Dec 8, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

I explained Zecora's rhyming as a zebra trait connected back to Discord's first reign in another story of mine. XD

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